You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken.
Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter
- Describe the problem with the equipment
- Explain what happened when you phoned the shop
- Say what you would like the manager to do.
Dear Sir or Mada,
I am writting this to make you aware with the problem I am facing with the equipment that i bought from your shop on last saturday.
I had a visit to your shop and bought a mixer- Grinder. I was given demo of that kitchen equipment regarding its use. however, at home when I tried to use is prepare food with steps that was demonstrated to me was not working actually it was not starting. I read manual and check all my electric connctions, all were fine but the mixer did not worked. I tried to call to your shop. Initially it was busy, however when I connected to one of your sales executive and asked to resolve my problem but rather to resolving my issue he ask me to call directly to service center by saying its faulty product and disconnect the call. this product has come-up with 5 years warranty. I would like you to take serious note on my problem and replace faulty product with new working product as soon as possible or I would charge you for fraud and will take legal actions if needed.
Awaiting your quick positive response. you may call on my mobile number available with you to make things quick.
Yours sincerely,
Andy
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 91, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...lem I am facing with the equipment that i bought from your shop on last saturday....
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... your shop and bought a mixer- Grinder. I was given demo of that kitchen equipmen...
^
Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...at kitchen equipment regarding its use. however, at home when I tried to use is prepare...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 345, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'work'
Suggestion: work
...ns, all were fine but the mixer did not worked. I tried to call to your shop. Initiall...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 530, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'asks'.
Suggestion: asks
...lem but rather to resolving my issue he ask me to call directly to service center b...
^^^
Line 5, column 626, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...faulty product and disconnect the call. this product has come-up with 5 years warran...
^^^^
Line 7, column 40, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... Awaiting your quick positive response. you may call on my mobile number available ...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, may, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46511627907 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34243197571 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604651162791 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.4591954855 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.0 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 4.34317383033 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331204249558 0.216113520407 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117123622735 0.0766984524023 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667969253197 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232310489155 0.12726935374 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505758463711 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.35 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.