Hosting sporting events such as the Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree with this statement? Use your own examples to support.
One the most conspicuous trends of today's world is the colossal upsurge in debate whether hosting of the international sporting events will bring benefits to host country or not. Some people believe that such events have negative impact one host county while other believe that it has positive impact. In my opinion, due to social and economical aspects the, these events bring much advantages to host country.
On the one hand, critics may point out the most significant drawback of hosting such events is the pollution created by the spectators of such event. For an example, during last Olympics, the hosted country has spend almost 70% of income to wast management. Moreover, the local environment will be affected with extreme noise pollution.
On the other hand, there are several arguments are in favor of my stance. The preponderant one is the economical benefits that these events brings to the hosting country. Firstly, these events will be the booster for economy of the hosting country, as huge number of spectators will come to country and this will open opportunities to local business persons in order to provide them accommodation and food. Secondly, local people will get chance to learn about the new cultures as the foreigners are in the country.
Lastly, the government and local authorities are putting great efforts to get maximum advantages of such event to the citizen of the nation by providing them ample opportunities to do business.
In conclusion, the arguments outlined above one can easily conclude that despite of some drawbacks, the advantages of hosting such events are too dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 20.9802955665 62% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1207.87684729 113% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15037593985 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67671284946 2.71678728327 99% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 139.433497537 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 6.0 1.56157635468 384% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6004785223 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.9669160288 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.91666666667 7.25397266985 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2487371822 0.242375264174 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958599488469 0.0925447433944 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695643467581 0.071462118173 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138630988545 0.151781067708 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055653291043 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 12.6369458128 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 53.1260098522 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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