You have just received a credit card statement from your bank The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make Write a letter to the bank manager In the letter Introduce yourself Explain that you did not buy the items

Essay topics:

You have just received a credit card statement from your bank. The statement lists a number of expensive purchases that you are sure you did not make.

Write a letter to the bank manager. In the letter:

• Introduce yourself.

• Explain that you did not buy the items listed.

• Say what you would like the bank to do to fix the problem

Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the credit card statement for the current month.

My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I am using your Bank's credit card that you had issued me for the past five years. I received a credit card statement of the current month where I found out that there was a list of electronic items such as the Dell Laptop Model X05 and Samsung earbuds 2.1 which had been brought from my credit card. However, I never purchased those items from any store or shopped online.

The statement shows that I bought the electronic gadgets on the 22nd of March, 2021. Certainly, I did not buy those items, and I want you please look into this matter as soon as possible.

I would request you to please search the root source of payments done. I have enclosed my current credit card statement with this letter for your reference. Plus, I urge you to reform my credit card statement, and please do not include any late fee fine as I am not going to pay until the issue is resolved.

I am looking forward to hearing a positive response.

Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'March 2021'.
Suggestion: March 2021
...t the electronic gadgets on the 22nd of March, 2021. Certainly, I did not buy those items, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, so, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57142857143 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30452384636 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600985221675 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.3544078687 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4545454545 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337275844938 0.216113520407 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1113106715 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593681203772 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159358064231 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880994404577 0.0580467560999 152% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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