You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office Write a letter to your manager In your letter describe the health problem explain why you think i

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You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the health problem
• explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office
• suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...n, IT department, employee ID -1212-IT, am writing this letter in order to inform ...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, thus, well, while, i think, kind of, as well as, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07172995781 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83338909936 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68776371308 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.787157889 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 4.34317383033 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209180282965 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614081626669 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375965247384 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881212154375 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374050268959 0.0580467560999 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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