You work in an office and have recently been experiencing a health problem. You think that the problem started because of the working conditions in the office. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
• describe the health problem
• explain why you think it was caused by conditions in the office
• suggest what the manager should do to improve the working conditions in the office
Dear Mr. Brown,
Greetings of the day! I, Jenny Jackson, IT department, employee ID -1212-IT, am writing this letter in order to inform you about the medical issue I am suffering from the past few weeks. Even if the work culture is extremely employee-friendly, I think due to some causative factors, I am facing these health problems.
At the onset, let me brief you on the specifics of my health concerns. First of all, while prolonged sitting in front of computer screens, I have been experiencing severe headaches as well as blurred vision. Moreover, considering this a minor issue, I overlooked this problem and started taking pain-killers. However, over time this is becoming more worsened, resulting in excruciating pain.
Further, even though being a healthy person along with taking a nutritious diet, I have never encountered such kind of situation. I tried to the underlying reasons behind this matter; I found that this condition mainly occurred due to bad lighting in my cubicle that has mainly caused the problem of visual impairment as examined by the physician.
Finally, I would like to add to your knowledge that this kind of issue is also there in many other parts of our office premises. Thus, while considering the plight, kindly do the needful as soon as possible by renovating the lighting system.
I would be really thankful if you can please look into this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Jenny Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 78, Rule ID: AM_I[1]
Message: Did you mean 'am I'?
Suggestion: am I
...n, IT department, employee ID -1212-IT, am writing this letter in order to inform ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, thus, well, while, i think, kind of, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 937.175257732 128% => OK
No of words: 237.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07172995781 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83338909936 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68776371308 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.787157889 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.166666667 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 4.34317383033 238% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209180282965 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614081626669 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375965247384 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881212154375 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374050268959 0.0580467560999 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.