Dear Mrs Thompson,
I am writing regarding upcoming school's trip to the foreign state.
My age is 28 years, I am a housewife and a mother of Collin Gibson, from the third grade. I am genuinely concerned about children’s well-being and safe environments during the trip. Therefore, I would highly appreciate if you would consider me as a potential candidate to accompany the group.
On the matter of personal qualifications, I have a solid experience of 7 years parenting together with taking care of big group of children. Namely, before having a baby, I used to work as a kindergartener for two years. It gave me confidence and patience working with young generation, moreover, the knowledge I gained could bring a great use to the following trip. Particularly, I can perform all supervisor duties together with handling an individual child's needs or issues, whether they might occur during the trip.
Moreover, I would like to ask you to provide me with more details about the adventure. Such as the itinerary of the trip, the main spots and places, which we will visit and stay during the nights.
If you will have any further question, please do not hesitate to contact me on my phone 231506 every weekday.
Yours sincerely,
Angela Gibson.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, third, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03317535545 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9373335516 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682464454976 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2928594979 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169222744364 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574200936671 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440917091911 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.083081250852 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319631752351 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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