Your former homestay family is coming to see you in your home country.
• Make plans to meet them at a convenient location
• Specify a time and date
• Suggest some activities you may all participate in during their visit
Dear Mrs. Smith,
I hope you and your lovely family are doing great. I was pleased to hear that you will be visiting my country next week and I have no doubt that you will enjoy your stay.
Based on your tour arrangement, you will come to my hometown on 12th February. So if you will be free on 13th, I suggest meeting you around noon time at one of my favorite restaurants located in the city center to have lunch together with your family. I will send the location to your phone, so please tell me what time is possible for you to get there.
As you know, Tehran is a big city which has lots of places worth visiting. But because of your short stay, I’ve selected some of the most enjoyable ones to visit together such as Milad Tower, Iran’s National Museum, and a mountainous region in northern Tehran. Please call me and let me know if you are interested so that we can arrange a detailed plan together.
Looking forward to seeing you soon.
Best wishes,
Ensieh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. Smith, I hope you and your lovely family are do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, no doubt, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47513812155 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30772627529 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674033149171 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.0946661479 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.296258820132 0.216113520407 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107792875799 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691446102137 0.0603063233224 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180916362614 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0587040010771 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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