You are attending a night course in the school. you are not happy with some parts of the course. Write a letter to the school director about this.
In your letter, you should tell:
• what course you are studying
• what things you are not happy about
• what you expect from the school director.
Dear sir/madam
I am writing to you regarding an issue with night class called Art history.
I started art course 2017 and currently it is my last year. I have to write thesis and defend it in June 2020. I choose night course art history with Mr Smith as I want to compare different art levels in my last thesis.
At the moment I am not happy about Mr Smith studying methods. He is always late in his class and after he arrives we watch movies or having a discussion in groups. This is not helping me with my final thesis because my grade is depending on it.
I wrote to you because you can do something about it. As you are a headmaster you should talk to him and discuss his contract over again as this is not suitable for being an teacher.
I hope this issue will be resolved and in a future we have better study method.
Yours faithfully
Claire Bird
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 61, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... 2017 and currently it is my last year. I have to write thesis and defend it in J...
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Line 9, column 112, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...rite thesis and defend it in June 2020. I choose night course art history with Mr...
^
Line 13, column 226, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...e with my final thesis because my grade is depending on it. I wrote to you because you ...
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Line 17, column 172, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...again as this is not suitable for being an teacher. I hope this issue will...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 729.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44512195122 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27019327666 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628048780488 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.9092389691 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2727272727 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9090909091 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266142091868 0.216113520407 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906062395295 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0839557980462 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135498475661 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101920787129 0.0580467560999 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.