Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work for helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter,
Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital.
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do.
Give details of when you would be available for the work
Dear Sir,
I would like to apply for an unpaid work, advertised in LinkedIn website on 20th October 2018. I am currently undertaking my postgraduate studies and in my final year and the reason I am looking for unpaid work is to get some experience before completing my studies so that it would be easy for me to get a job right after.
I had completed many financial and accountancy units throughout my degree and I successfully delivered good grades in my assignments and exams. Therefore, I would like to work in finance department of the hospital. I am used to working at a fast pace to meet deadlines and my attention to detail was developed during undertaking my degree.
Moreover, my skills include working with children, internal and external stakeholders and most importantly senior management. I am really good with numbers, which could be very beneficial for finance department, and I would be able to learn from them as well.
If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview. I would be available to join next week as I have an assignment deadline submission this weekend. I look forward hearing from you soon.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Faithfully,
Hasan Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...asy for me to get a job right after. I had completed many financial and accoun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97630331754 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98482644756 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63981042654 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 320.4 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.047868844 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.91666666667 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248736847959 0.216113520407 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100769785933 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823291961188 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140929961571 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703543053776 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.