Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time. Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter:
Explain why you would like to do the unpaid work at the hospital.
Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do.
Give details when you would be available for this work.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in reference to your latest advertisement for volunteer work at the medical center. I am willing and able to serve in my free time I would like to take up the offer.
It has always been in my nature to help others and serve the community to the best of my ability using every given opportunity. Furthermore, I have a bachelor’s degree in Kinesiology which I believe would further assist me in helping the patients at the hospital.
I would like to do the unpaid job during my spare time. I am afraid I would not be able to dedicate a fixed schedule for my services to the hospital. Therefore, I would like to contribute to work that has flexible hours. However, I would be able to come into work all seven days of the week at varying times of the day.
I appreciate for the opportunity you are giving people to give back to the community and I hope you consider me for your vacancy.
Hope to receive a quick and favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, therefore, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 842.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52688172043 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73382735398 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586021505376 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5631533609 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5454545455 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410098899345 0.216113520407 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131126512078 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078578510922 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167676024944 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114362433046 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.