Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Over the recent years, the main role of university courses is increasingly becoming a source of debate. Many people opine the academic studies should lead trainees to meet society’s future demands. Although this view has some merits, I strongly believe that students are expected to retain their right to opt their favorite majors and universities are also required to independently expand the gates of all ranges of sciences regardless of whether the courses are utilitarian in the future.
Historically, the university is not only the main responsible sector to enlarge skirts of sciences, but ...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'follow'
Suggestion: follow
...ations. Accordingly, the college should follows its historical mission up and provides ...
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Line 5, column 230, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended choosing'.
Suggestion: recommended choosing
... university. Consequently, it is highly recommended to choose a study area having sufficient position...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a dozen'.
Suggestion: a dozen
... calling for international forces while dozen of its young graduated citizens are job...
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Discourse Markers used:
['accordingly', 'also', 'but', 'consequently', 'however', 'if', 'nonetheless', 'so', 'thus', 'while', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.246418338109 0.247107548796 100% => OK
Verbs: 0.143266475645 0.15552993741 92% => OK
Adjectives: 0.103151862464 0.0946569551029 109% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0744985673352 0.0501201869031 149% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0401146131805 0.0437536398559 92% => OK
Prepositions: 0.12893982808 0.122223957237 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0401146131805 0.0403219363162 99% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.28807724966 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0343839541547 0.0326786765898 105% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0945558739255 0.0861751148067 110% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0200573065903 0.0214082191602 94% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00859598853868 0.0119246538136 72% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2073.0 1933.38276553 107% => OK
No of words: 317.0 316.052104208 100% => OK
Chars per words: 6.51886792453 6.10592293882 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20519365927 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.429022082019 0.37474360046 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.337539432177 0.284197041944 119% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.264984227129 0.203843217982 130% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.17665615142 0.137313986986 129% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28807724966 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656151419558 0.560935902166 117% => OK
Word variations: 81.5541727881 60.7401812628 134% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0911823647 75% => OK
Sentence length: 26.4166666667 20.7725350517 127% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.3896888726 49.5273876611 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.6109422492 93.4120437189 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.5623100304 15.2821509519 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.547112462006 0.594174754866 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.39078156313 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01102204409 60% => OK
Readability: 60.1706098843 49.1922392462 122% => OK
Elegance: 1.61111111111 1.69127372897 95% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Topic essay coherence: 0.311833963595 0.332604825255 94% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.074262347487 0.102734651613 72% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0582492437163 0.0668474354756 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.55390509623 0.534917948617 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.140163626969 0.148666948902 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13023298695 0.13441755203 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705500065309 0.0742828286743 95% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.314297573086 0.324241079732 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0895924384544 0.0640056729886 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.22159936475 0.22793763319 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722712322503 0.0582452615562 124% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.41883767535 88% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.88977955912 136% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.60220440882 38% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 3.0 2.00200400802 150% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.493987976 114% => OK
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 7.5 Out of 9