Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has the technology affected the types of relationships people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Nowadays, technology play a vital role in human’s life and all aspects of daily life have been influenced by different type of technology. From the modern satellites and rockets which make it possible to travel to the moon, until the way people communicate with each other. Although technology result in many advantages and increase the quality of life, it makes many difference in the interpersonal relationships. This essay looks at some of the impacts of technology on people’s interactions and whether are they positive or negative effects.
First of all, it should be stuck in the mind that usage of technology in all aspects of life is an unavoidable issue. In fact, in this modern world, where the pace of life is too fast, people have to rely on technology more than previous decades. To illustrate, the physical interaction of people has decreased significantly as a result of technology. There are many different platforms for social media such as Telegram or WhatsApp that people can install on their phone or laptop and keep in touch with others wherever they have access to the internet. The ease of this kind of communication causes people to prefer this method instead of spending many hours in traffic to commute. These connections, however, are the best ways for those who live in other cities or countries.
On the other hand, technology has affected other main task of life. For example, distance learning is a new system of education or distance working which is executed is many developed countries. In these systems, students or employees don not have to attend universities or their workplace. It is obvious that they have less physical interactions with peers or their colleagues. Another change that happened as a consequence of technology is about shopping habits. Todays, online shopping is the best way to purchase our needs that reduce the relationships among people since there is no need to any communication.
A great deal of research has been done about the role of technology in human interactions and according to the latest results, despite the fact that technology associated with many benefits, this development brings a new set of negative concerns. Lack of social interactions is the main drawbacks that can leads to psychological disorders such as depression, tension or loneliness. Most of the people would be depend on technology considerably and after a while they prefer to stay at home to do their job or study. Another negative consequence is increasing the number of health problems which is because of lack of physical activities. Obesity is an outstanding instance which is becoming increasingly serious among teenagers.
In conclusion, it is obvious that technology has make the interpersonal connection easier but people interaction lesser. Although this development causes more access but it is associated with many negatives result as well.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 74.0 41.998997996 176% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2458.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 470.0 315.596192385 149% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22978723404 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.65612321451 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01522393422 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508510638298 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 777.6 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6693905813 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.869565217 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4347826087 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389934555919 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0981207081761 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624478281629 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21942874001 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406088459462 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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