Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
In the modern society, almost teenagers choose to study and work at home instead of go to work or study at school. Some people think that technology is become more and more popular because of cheaper and comfortable. From my point of view, I partially concur with this idea that technology is comfortable and easy for user.
In this day and age, remote work and sudy online is becoming prevalent because it have many positive effects. The most obviuos advantage of working from home and learn subject online is that it saves us a large amount on commuting. Not only that, employees also can find all of courses in the internet include: Maths, English,... Moreover, people who remote work also come with flexibale schedules, which means that worker can start and end their day as they choose.
As opposed to the benefits derived from home worker and study online is its harm. A major drawback associated with study online is that it is challenge to focus 100 percent on study because of distractions by things like movies or games,... Not only that, distractions at work will have negatives effects on performance , and are likely to make more errors at work. Moreover, citizens who at home is difficult to devlope social skills such as communication, teamwork skills,... So, it will cause you might experience feelings of loneliness and isolation sometimes. By far the most important advantage of travelling to a school or workplace is that you will have co- worker or closefriend who are always have you, come rain or shine.
To return to my original idea, sudy and work at home bring both pros and cons. Even so, I totally agree that it suitable for each different person.
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- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 61
- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 61
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...logy is comfortable and easy for user. In this day and age, remote work and sud...
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...online is becoming prevalent because it have many positive effects. The most obviuos...
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...dvantage of working from home and learn subject online is that it saves us a large amou...
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... in the internet include: Maths, English,... Moreover, people who remote work also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, even so, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82986111111 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5887024725 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579861111111 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1191609179 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 92.7333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282663156366 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896961035375 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684395452487 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169338539224 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870695750986 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.