Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Thanks to the development of technology, people nowadays can work and study from home just by an internet accessible device, which is more convenient and cheaper than the original way. In my opinion, this step of technological development is an essential for the world, but people need to understand and control them in adequate level.
On the one hand, technology provides people with mediums to work and study from home, which allows them to choose their favourite and changeable workplace. Workplace is said to be one of the most important factors affect people productivity, so this very first advantage of technological development is worth think of. Moreover, it is convenient for people to not have to spend money and time on transport to company or school. For example, people tended to spend more time to sleep in the Covid-19 pandemic, because they did not have to go to work or school but could finish their work online.
On the other hand, working and studying with partners is necessary for human everyday life. Social interaction in working and studying helps people to improve their knowledge, communication skills and emotion control ability. For instance, student or worker who usually present in front of many people face to face increase their experience and confidence more than those who do not have that changes practically. Even when people have their daily communication with others directly, they might improve their ability to express their thoughts and feelings, which people can hardly do if they work or study from home.
In conclusion, while the convenience of technology, which allows people to work and study from distance, is undeniable, I believe that social interaction in offline working and studying process is still a necessity for human life.
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- Around the world many adults are working from home and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible Do you think this is a positive or negative development Give reasons for your answer and includ 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17586206897 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75540545387 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.537931034483 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.5205751611 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.454545455 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25434385701 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105602527212 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544923323543 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173431428317 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04865711591 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.