Being a celebrity such as a famous film star or sport personality brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being celebrity brings more benfits or more problems? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant example from you own knowledge or experience.
The famous personality such as sport star, film star and singers are getting a lot of benefits from the governmentbut they also face numerous problems in their life due to the audiance. There are unprecedened advantages of becoming famous personality and distinctive problems of becoming a star in the world I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, becoming a highlighted person in the front of the whole world can cause uncountable problems. The predominant problem is it effect on personal life of an individual. To elaborte, unquestionably after becoming celebrity the peronal life is highlighted in the front of the world in a snapdeal. In families their are some personal issues which family members do not want to discuss with the world but it is totally different in case of celebrities, the media members conduct a interview in which they ask a silly questions to celebrities whereas it is compulsory for star to give answer of that question. To cite an example, the famous punjabi singer Dilpreet dhillon had some personal issue with his wife due to his personality in fort of world his all privacy leaked in the world which is extremely shameful for him. Therefore, it attributedly affect on personal life.
Apart from this, there are numerous benefits of becoming a clebrity. The pioneer one is every government work is easily done. To explicate, in banks or in other government places there is one portion for the senior citizens in which the hige respect is give to that citizen or every work is done without any efforts like standing in a line, waiting for turn and many more are avoidable for them. Hence, in the state of the art the respect is given to famous personalities.
In conclusion, becoming celebrity have both advantages and disadvantages but according to my prespective it mostly effects on personal life which heart alot. So, the problems are more than benefits.
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also, but, hence, if, so, therefore, whereas, apart from, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99384615385 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91616348435 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.1735338596 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.928571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78571428571 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215731401343 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736688064269 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524716881342 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133115274162 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369717853716 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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