The best way to improve health is to exercise daily. To what extent do you agree?
One of the biggest positive impacts of daily exercise is that it reduces the chances of getting ill. There are many diseases caused by a passive lifestyle such as obesity and diabetes. Obesity is a condition caused due to lack of exercise and unhealthy eating habits. Obesity makes peoples' life challenging on many levels and increases the possibility of having a heart attack. The main target of obese people is to reduce their weight and exercising helps to burn calories hence lose weight. Therefore, staying active considered important to fight with obesity.
In conclusion, there are numerous benefits to the exercise on our health. Being active is really important to live a healthy life both mentally and physically. f everyday life. There are many exercise forms like yoga, running and meditation that can help with this problem. For example, a study shows that a group of adolescents with depression got significantly better after their school started a meditation course. Moreover, regular exercise is known to help with breathing problems and improving quality of sleep.
The most effective method in developing and improving health is considered to be regular exercise. In this essay, I agree that exercise is the key to live a healthy life. Firstly, I will explain how an active lifestyle makes us physically better and secondly, I will consider the positive effects of exercising on our mental health.
- Human activity has had a negative effect on ecosystems animals and plants across the world Some people believe this cannot be changed while others feel we can still take action to protect living things Discuss both sides and give your opinion 56
- A person s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions Old fashioned values such as honour kindness and trust no longer seem important To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 61
- Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion 56
- It is important for children to spend time outside than spending time in front of a screen watching TV or playing video games To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people say students should be given more homework Others say that children should be free to enjoy their youth Discuss both views and give your opinion 69
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, really, second, secondly, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70789370814 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501587301587 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8069907919 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9523809524 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.19047619048 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29457537544 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995333659347 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.139995677958 0.0667982634062 210% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218218684939 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.28083769793 0.056905535591 494% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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