People will buy a product if it fulfills their needs and requirements so there is no need to advertise. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Marketing and advertisements are a major part of the sales process. However, some people argue that ads serve no real propose to motivate people's purchases since consumers already buy their needs. I completely disagree with this view due to fact that advertisements give a minimum guarantee for a product's quality and transform consumer's desires into needs.
First of all, adverts are the most direct way to show consumers the quality of the product. The content of the ad is less important than the fact company was able to produce, distribute and promote its product. KFC, for instance, has a great ad strategy to showcase its quality with the '11 spice secret recipe' campaign. When a lesser-known company premiers an advertisement this does not only show their quality but also is evidence of they have enough revenue to validate whatever product they sell or service they provide.
Secondly, ads not only promote products but also creates new needs. Many people can indeed live fulfilling lives with fewer products, but ads simulate consumers desires. Apple is a great example of this, they created a huge demand for their products using marketing strategies. People nowadays, buy iPhone's or Macbooks not because they necessarily need them but they want to be part of a group. Stylish ads like the 'Think different' campaign helped them assert their dominance in the market.
In conclusion, I believe advertising serves an important role in society. It serves as quality assurance and creates more demand for products which is essential for a good economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 412, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...to be part of a group. Stylish ads like the Think different campaign helped them assert t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12156862745 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6851436005 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61568627451 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3784928325 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2857142857 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175386300416 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574882341429 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0374224089541 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104901402783 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050787996123 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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