The best way to solve the world’s environmental problems is to increase the price
of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Environmental problems have dramatically increased over the last few years, is the most
threatening issue the world faces today. Although many people believe that raise the price of fuel
such as petrol and diesel will help in reducing environmental problems. I partially agree with
given statement. My position is argued further with explanations.
At the outset there are a plethora of reasons why governments need to hike fuel price and the first
and foremost is people use cars for traveling one places to other places intends of public
transportation because of more comfort and that why people use more cars and emission more
carbon and toxic gases in atmosphere. In addition increase the fossil fuel price give one’s
alternative options to use renewable energy sources like solar energy for as a fuel of vehicle.
Moreover individuals use public transportation for journey and commuting and also people use
vehicles only for necessary as a result of this action environment should be clear.
However, not only automotive are responsible for environmental issues. There are more polluted
industries are responsible for this because they are discharge chemical waste in water and release
harmful poisonous gases in air. Furthermore hiking fuel prices also hike basic essential things
which are transport from one place to other place and cause inflation in nation. In addition
governments should take punishable action and develop strict laws on degradation of environment
and launch awareness programs on save environment.
To conclude, it can be said that increase fuel prices is convert people to use public transportation
and renewable energy. Although it not only solution to decrease environmental issues, responsible
authority needs to take serious actions to save environment for next generation of this plants.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...arbon and toxic gases in atmosphere. In addition increase the fossil fuel price give one...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...solar energy for as a fuel of vehicle. Moreover individuals use public transportation f...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...elease harmful poisonous gases in air. Furthermore hiking fuel prices also hike basic esse...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...place and cause inflation in nation. In addition governments should take punishable act...
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...save environment for next generation of this plants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, however, moreover, so, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57042253521 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94131080711 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577464788732 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0581025701 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.692307692 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.30769230769 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154250716081 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601357564313 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495981555367 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0481633913615 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515832982879 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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