Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, issues related to the environment rise at an alarming rate in the world and are debatable issues on the global platform. Many individuals advocate that the extinction of specific plants and animals is the main environmental problem. However, other masses argue that beyond this problem there are other more crucial environmental issues in the world. This essay will not only discuss both views but my opinion will be highlighted while concluding this.
At the outset, there are myriad reasons for the loss of particular flora and fauna. Firstly, many tropical forests in the world are on edge of extinction due to the rise of industrializing and it may affect the inhabitant of animals that live in the forests. For example, the Amazon forest reduces every day and the reason behind this problem is wildfire and the use of forest land for agriculture purposes, the Amazon forest is the inhabitant of thousands of creatures that might be affected by human activities. Secondly, many people poaching animals and stone rare species of plants for their business which would reduce the numbers of rare wildlife and plants. For instance, in the world, only one white African rhino lives in Zimbabwe and these types of many endangered animals are on edge of extinction.
On the other hand, some people believe that there are some bigger other environmental problems in the world. First and foremost is a global warning, which increases day by day because of the emission of toxic gases by industries and vehicles in the air, which increase the overall temperature of the earth. Apart from this, deforestation and wildfire reduce numbers of agricultural land which reduce crop yield and shortage of food in the world. For example, one study concluded by the University of Toronto that due to decrease in the forest every year reduces 2 percentage rainfalls on the Earth.
In conclusion, it can be said that although the development of the surrounding area is necessary for humans, it is prominent for people to save their environment as their duty. I think that the governments and people should work together on every environmental issue, not only think about plants and animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07756232687 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72744188474 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512465373961 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6903932446 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.2 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.86666666667 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207165501246 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780437528333 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088855101768 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122256491512 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623262425907 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.