Many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar.
Do you agree or disagree?
In the contemporary time, beverages and food which include sugar more popular among people. However, some people believe that nowadays drink and food items contain sugar which has many drawbacks in a healthy life and they suggest that sugary products should be lavish to reduce consumption of sugar. I agree with this notion and in this essay, I will discuss it further.
At the outset, there are a plethora of reasons why sugary goods should be made expensive. Firstly, in modern times cases of sugar-related diseases such as diabetes and obesity increase day by day in the world. Moreover, diabetes reduces the human body’s anti-bodies that are defending the virus, and obesity increases the chance of heart-related issues. Secondly, increase prices in sugar-related commodities, which encourage people about the disadvantages of sugar and its effect on health. In addition, the government should begin a campaign about the ill effect of sugary goods, thus people know about the side effects of an overdose of sugar on their body. Thirdly, the rising price of sugar influences people to consume organic and healthy beverages and foods, which enhances companies to manufacturing sugar-free and nature eatable items.
Apart from this, hiked price in sugar should be made sugary products less popular and increase sugar-free products that added nature ingredients between people. To add, beverage and food industries commence production of natural and healthy products instead of sugary items. Besides this, consumption of natural products like fruits and vegetables sell surge and raise the income of farmers.
In conclusion, it can be said that although sugar contains glucose which is valuable in the body, it has a more ill effect on the human body which increases disease. Government should impose a tax on sugar to reduce the use of sugar in food and drink products and encourage people to consume natural products.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, thus, apart from, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2996742671 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66609940314 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530944625407 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4449255438 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.214285714 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9285714286 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.428276553302 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149779996285 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103948010649 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283007933242 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513713023079 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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