Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is often assumed that a high salary is more helpful than being satisfied. Though the sense of job fulfillment and happiness can only be achieved if the person is satisfied. In this essay, we’ll discuss how satisfaction outweighs the big salary.
First of all, being satisfied with the job provides the person a sense of accomplishment, it enables him to keep working with the same productivity which soon results in the progress of both the company and personal. Satisfaction pushes them to go for a big target, as it is what they wanted. For evidence, people working at Google are enjoying their job so much that they are working overtime without any extra pay just because they want to reach new heights of them working what they love. Therefore not only money can make you happy, but the passion for the work you are doing also plays a major role.
Since in fact, money can’t buy happiness, working long hour with no productive reasons always result in making yourself more degradable. Even coming back to home with a lot of money but without an unstable mind is not worth spending. Running hard for a job which makes you feels like killing yourself is not a wise decision to be made even at the cost of a big salary. In a survey done by The Economist, they found that paying a good salary for the kind work that individuals don’t want always results in bad quality.
To end, in this essay we discussed the importance of satisfaction and happiness with the job matter the most not the salary. In my opinion, pursuing a job that you love is what should be focused upon, then what you are paid for doing something else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 493, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...heights of them working what they love. Therefore not only money can make you happy, but ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 279, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
... Running hard for a job which makes you feels like killing yourself is not a wise dec...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, therefore, in fact, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1358.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65068493151 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52787054261 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 415.8 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7638347454 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.461538462 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07692307692 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197488892598 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070135486177 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480729720153 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125795321284 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320735488231 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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