Boxing is a blood sport which often results in physical injury. It is inappropriate for this sport to exist in the modern age.
Do you agree or disagree?
People nowadays think that boxing is a dangerous sport and can damage physically. So, It is very essential for the world to ban the game and prevent the coming age. As far as I am concerned, I totally agree with the latter statement. The following reasons for the agreement are explained below.
First of all, boxing is a game that gained popularity in the mid 18th century. Since then many boxers have lost their lives due to the lethal sport. The game has many varieties which are similar in many ways and; at the same time, more dangerous. These fancy official organized fights attracted many youths and due to which unofficial deadly fights started taking place, which started raising the concerns over the security and peace among the people. Nowadays, One more concern is, due to free and easy access to media minor kids are also watching the matches and repeating them with their groups. So to avoid any physical damage or loss of life such games should be prohibited and less dangerous games should be introduced.
On the other hand, The rules of boxing if modified and made safer with respect to the hard impacts, then it can be continued. The more deadly version of boxing such as MMA should be removed completely.
To conclude, I would say that the game should not be banned but regularised so that selected people can have the authority to watch the match. And, I also believe that such a pattern will actually benifit benefit society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ned popularity in the mid 18th century. Since then many boxers have lost their lives ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, if, so, then, such as, first of all, with respect to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77470355731 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35062581768 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620553359684 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4609727116 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2857142857 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112240860286 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0398529580484 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.032521318625 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0671277064634 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562502975986 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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