Bullying is a big problem in many schools
What do you think are the causes of this?
What solutions can you suggest?
These days, many students are concerned about the bullying between their peers in the school. Due to the lack of the adequate education from teenagers’ parents, those who are persecuted can be affected by a child's wrongful actions, especially with their mentality. In this essay, I will give the reasons and the possible solutions for this negative trend.
To begin with, there are some factors that cause this alarming problem. For the most part, youngsterts, being not received a great of parents’ care, are more likely to be have several anti-social behaviors as well as hurtful actions to others in order to get the attention of adults. Some children struggle in making friends with peers. Therefore, to build confidence and make themselves more stand out in the school, they start to get along with the classmates in the wrong way such as being a harasser, making pejorative speech. Having not gained any legal liability in this age, offenders tend to repeat the severe bullying without worrying.
However, as the problems are on our doorstep, there are obvious ways to deal with them. Firstly, the support from child's home is the best solution to encourage and adjust teens’ toxic behaviors. In detail, adults should take more time to talk and get to know their child so that many mental problems can be resolved. Additionally, having accessed the school’s environment frequently, children are hard to avoid and deal with bullies. Schools need to create more bullying prevention programs, exam rooms along with equipping a depth of knowledge to be a good guidance counselor for people in need.
In summary, to create a safe environment in schools for students, there is a lot of assistance required for both parents and schools.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, so, therefore, well, in summary, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09027777778 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6545950727 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0435163741 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.714285714 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143092283182 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532673823022 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414092440183 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848770018578 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389203414478 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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