In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
The fact that students have bad actions or words and form a group that specializes in bullying their friends has always been a burning problem in schools. There are many reasons leading to these bad behaviors of students and the following article will give some examples as well as some ways to minimize the above situation.
The first cause and also the cause with the greatest impact on children's bad behavior is the influence of family and society. Children are like a blank sheet of paper and it will be filled through the daily words and behaviors they receive through the people around them. From there, children's personalities and thoughts will gradually be formed in a positive or negative direction. For example, their parents always solve problems by arguing and using harsh words, when they go to school they will act the same way. They will always quarrel and quarrel with their friends with bad words when things go wrong. Therefore, in order for a child to become obedient and good-natured, the education and example from the surrounding adults is extremely necessary. The second reason for bullying at school is the lack of attention from teachers and the inattentiveness of friends. For example, when a student is bullied, friends around just stand outside to witness, but refuse to report to the teacher or stand up for the bullied friend. This often causes the sufferer to feel increasingly isolated and depressed, which in turn leads to extreme behaviour. In addition, when teachers know there is a problem between students, they don't really come up with a solution, but just scold a little as a warning. This will cause the bully group to become more aggressive without learning any lessons.
The best solution is that teachers and schools must give some appropriate punishment to deter students who violate those violations. In addition, teachers must contact the parents of both parties to clarify the problem and come up with the best solution.
In conclusion, all children's behaviors are largely influenced by those around them (especially family). Therefore, we should focus on educating children from an early age so that we can easily shape them in the right way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using 'the surrounding people'?
Suggestion: the surrounding people
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02191780822 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59290716642 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 22.6846898967 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 107.823529412 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4705882353 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47058823529 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133794592323 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438031722818 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0319884671895 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0755179621819 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337558647471 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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