In recent decades, attending childcare courses has been receiving a great deal of media attention around the world, causing some public controversy. Although this trend is not without advantage, some might oppose this idea due to its seemingly high cost and unnecessary.
There are a number of reasons why some advocate attending childcare programmes.
First, it helps parents can gain a better understanding of their children's characteristic traits. So they can easily find an educating method appropriate for their offspring, which can help them become a more well-rounded person. For example, if parents use a negative form of discipline such as physical punishment, their children might be more likely to use violence to solve their own problems later in life.
Second, taking part in childcare workshops gives parents the chance to learn how to balance working life and family life, so that they can spend more quality time with their family, contributing to strengthening family bonds. Without parental care and guidance, students are easily committing criminal activities such as shoplifting, robbery, and violent attack, which has a severe impact on their future.
There are also a number of reasons why some oppose the idea.
It is clear that the childcare-course costs tend to be the prohibitive expense and these courses give an undesirable result. Instead of, money-consuming into parenting courses, parents should spend money for their children to attend practical training courses such as independent thinking skills, teamwork skills. These essential skills play an important role in their future career which can help them find a well-paid job, they are more likely to earn a stable income and improve their living standard.
Another reason is that the technology industry has been growing in recent decades, creating a wide range of digital gadgets, so people easily possess a smartphone to access an endless source of information on the internet including parenting methods without engaging in any courses.
In conclusion, taking parenting courses has both positive and negative sides. Parents should consider carefully to decide the best solution for their offspring.
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- nowadays people waste a lot of food that was bought from shops and restaurants why do you think people waste food what can be done to reduce the amount of food that throw away 80
- Caring for children is probably the most important thing of the society It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 89
- Every day millions of tons of food are wasted all over the world Why do you think this is happening and how can solve this problem 80
- in some countries governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move out of the cities and into regional areas Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1856.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47492625369 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82476372836 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613569321534 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6558232068 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.733333333 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119063947737 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450563393955 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363466465792 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0524253021399 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043711504814 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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