As children become adults, their social behavior changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children's social behavior and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
Growth is a phase of life that every living creature experiencing. As for humans there are several milestones that we endures from babies to toddler up until to senior age. However, the most defining moments is when children transforming into an adults. children experience many changes in their life both in physically, hormonal, and also mentally which later affecting to their social behavior.
Both female and male children going through a drastic changes during the adolescence. Young boys will notice how their voice started to changes and they will start to experiencing a wet dream that were triggers by the testosterone. Girls also face a whole different changes to their body and also they will start to experiencing menstruation. Due to the hormonal changes that transform from children to teenager, it is very likely that they will deploy some changes in how they behave as an individual.
The stark difference between children and adults behavior is how children often acts more care-freely with their peers despite their gender, while adults have restrict themselves in order not to be perceived negatively from the society. To some extent it is good not to be very open and carefree especially in a new and unknown environment. As an adults they generally acquire more interpersonal skill and know how to act accordingly to the situation that they're in.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...hat every living creature experiencing. As for humans there are several milestones...
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Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'endure'
Suggestion: endure
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'an adult' or simply 'adults'?
Suggestion: an adult; adults
...ents is when children transforming into an adults. children experience many changes in th...
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Suggestion: Children
...n children transforming into an adults. children experience many changes in their life b...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
...d male children going through a drastic changes during the adolescence. Young boys will...
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Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'change'.
Suggestion: change
... will notice how their voice started to changes and they will start to experiencing a w...
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Suggestion: change
...rone. Girls also face a whole different changes to their body and also they will start ...
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Message: Use past participle here: 'restricted'.
Suggestion: restricted
...despite their gender, while adults have restrict themselves in order not to be perceived...
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Suggestion: an adult; adults
...ly in a new and unknown environment. As an adults they generally acquire more interperson...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: they're
...o act accordingly to the situation that theyre in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, however, if, so, while, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13839285714 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79878672124 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0738604133 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.636363636 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3636363636 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315561035451 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101108684192 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806736314718 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191221980755 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298902138651 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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