Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In recent years, the advancement of scientifics has been creating thousands of benefits of human’s life. While there is a school of thought that the paramount invention of the last century is computers, I partly agree with this statement because loads of inventions are as crucial as computers nowadays.
On the one hand, thanks to computers, humans can take advantage to improve capacity in work both in management of information. Computers can be regarded as handy equipment which not only enhances effectiveness in work but also creates a friendly environment for working remotely or from home. When it comes to working without geographical distance, employees can sit anywhere in front of their computers, attend online meetings or report their tasks, which brings faster and more convenient results with helpful software and apps. In addition, management by computers could save time and physical space, as well as create a visible and logical arrangement. By folders and files laid on computers’ memories, users easily access or render them.
On other hand, despite a great deal of those prons, the invention of computers cannot be ranked at the paramount position, compared with steps of other aspects such as physics, medicals, and biologics. To reach Mars, there obviously requires more science-technical conditions and excellent engineers, as well. For another example, this is the fact that development of computers cannot lead to a particular medicine which can stop Coronavirus overwhelming in the world. If humans had been daydreaming due to the advancement of computers, they would not have broken away from poverty and out-of-date.Notwithstanding the invention of computers has contributed a significance towards humans, other inventions also play a necessary role that enhances humans’ physical and mental health to be stronger and more blissful.
In conclusion, computers are really peerless in work and management, besides, I strongly believe that other advancement can be considered as primarily as computers.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Notwithstanding
...roken away from poverty and out-of-date.Notwithstanding the invention of computers has contribu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51437699681 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25794326009 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7100894257 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165354084775 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583209838203 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670646359511 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110323243232 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584635061606 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Notwithstanding
...roken away from poverty and out-of-date.Notwithstanding the invention of computers has contribu...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, really, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1726.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51437699681 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25794326009 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613418530351 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.7100894257 49.4020404114 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.833333333 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165354084775 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583209838203 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670646359511 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110323243232 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584635061606 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.