The continued rise in the world’s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are the causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
Recent decades have witnessed a tremendous increase in the population of human beings. While many people believe it will continue to rise and have a negative impact in the future, I would hold that this has yet been the most intensive challenge for humanity.
Poverty is the main reason for over-population. In developed countries, women are unable to access contraceptive use in order to void unwanted pregnancies. Even when they have learned how to use it, they still need a give birth to create child labor supporting the family in the future. Those impoverished families have kept on going in the endless cycle of poverty and ignorance since they were born.
The overcrowded society suffers hugely because of their "ego" Multinational companies have always love cheap and young labors in developing countries so as to save their business expenses and avoid tax. They may not be aware of the interdependent co-arising between the population as well as ecology and their ego. Furthermore, the poor can be educated about family planning, but they need to meet "the need of their family." That is the thing that most authorities can not help their citizen, except for large factories. And thus, the cycle of the bigger issues, such as climate change, intensive farming, and overexploited resources, continues to roll on. Overpopulation is indeed a mall link in the large chain of "ego problems" that humanity is tackling.
In brief, the world has become a "slightly less lovely place" regarding the detriments of overpopulation. While overcrowded societies have countless solvable causes, I believe the human ego is the chief cause of more prominent issues.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: ON_GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
.... Those impoverished families have kept on going in the endless cycle of poverty and ign...
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Line 5, column 109, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'loved'.
Suggestion: loved
...os; Multinational companies have always love cheap and young labors in developing co...
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Line 5, column 161, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...nd young labors in developing countries so as to save their business expenses and avoid ...
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Line 7, column 32, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ling. In brief, the world has become a 'slightly less lovely place' ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, may, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, as to, except for, in brief, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1439.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32962962963 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11160710332 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648148148148 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0820422402 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.692307692 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.61538461538 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0972769629428 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035796201091 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407475424757 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654295192742 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502485229389 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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