The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.
What are the causes of this continued rise?
Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity?
In present age, population is increasing at higher rate. In the last decade, population is increased one by third part. as population is rising, it is directly developing problems due to which human has to suffer. There are many causes of this continued rise such as unawareness of contraceptives, high desire of baby boy by the society.
In my opinion, it is the greatest problem faced by people.
Eventhough, people are modern as well as well-educated, they do not want use to use contraceptives for safe sex. Though some people are not aware of it and keep on having babies. It is one of the biggest cause of growing population. Still there are families in rural parts of developing countries who are uneducated and unknown of safety measures.
However, people have accepted gender equality in many places but there are some places where people still discriminates between son and a daughter. Mainly, hindu people wants to have a son because in their religious book named 'Geeta' where it is said that if they don't have a son they couldn't get a good life after death. that's why people give birth until they have a son.
Due to the highly growing population, problems are also increasing. Problems like crowded areas, more people less shelter as wells as food and increasing pollution. It has become the main problem in today's world.
- The continued rise in the world's population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time.What are the causes of this continued rise?Do you agree that it is the greatest problem faced by humanity? 56
- In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this?What solutions can you suggest? 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, third, well, as to, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86899563319 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7226575217 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620087336245 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.4355742873 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197657280142 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694859811432 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770330555923 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132050681046 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109096840091 0.056905535591 192% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.