Current years a great number of teens are deciding to study oversea.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
In recent years, students get used to dream about studying abroad. But there have advantage and disadvantage sides of studying in different countries. This essay will discuss both sides of studying.
Studying abroad may give you better education and life experience. It also enable to learn new language or culture of foreign countries. Furthermore, if student go abroad for studying they will communicate with foreign people and face up to new culture and destination. As a result, students get not only more knowledge but also new information. As well as, studying and living abroad can expand people’s worldview and they will make new friends there. In addition, one of my classmates went to Canada to study abroad two years ago. And she always writes me about her new friends and education systems.
On the other hand, studying abroad has a few disadvantages. A lot of students who went to oversea have a homesickness, because they are far from their family, friends and home. It lead to them sadness and depression. Another words, some people who go another country, often come back to their hometown because of finance.
In conclusion, studying in a different country is very good for teenager’s future life if they return to their home during every summer holiday. And then, they will have not any problems. In addition, people who study abroad may find a good job related to their job to their knowledge, experience and skills. Moreover, they can have a better future than other teens.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1253.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.012 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68841961011 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8776958137 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6111111111 106.682146367 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8888888889 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106582208908 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0375072022499 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456208671132 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0743992353886 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489068269263 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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