Cycling is healthier and environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?
Regardless of the physical and environmental benefits of bike riding, it is becoming less attractive. This essay will point out the reasons and suggest some solutions for this phenomenon.
With regards to reasons, one of the most indispensable explanations why people gradually lose their affinity for pedaling is the need for a more convenient and efficient mode of travel. This is derived from the fact that commuting by bicycle is physically demanding and time-consuming; while individuals now often lead a sedentary lifestyle. Therefore, motor vehicles tend to be a more favorable option. Besides, bikers are at a higher risk of engaging in accidents than motorized means of transportation. For example, a recent survey conducted by the National University of Vietnam showed that when an accident occurs, a bike rider is prone to more serious injuries or even fatalities than one traveling in a car or on a motorbike with the proportion of approximately 35% and 13% respectively.
Simultaneously, several pragmatic methods can be applied in order to tackle this problem. Initially, the government should impose higher taxes on cars and motorcycles and replace lenient laws with stricter regulations on the consumption of fossil fuels. By adopting these policies, the utility of non-environmentally friendly modes of transport will be discouraged and many people will be urged to opt for bikes in close proximity. Besides, citizens should be educated to be aware of the advantages of cycling and their responsibilities for protecting the environment. For example, in Vietnam, the environmental campaign called ‘Green Cyclists’ is held annually to promote environmental consciousness and encourage citizens to cycle.
In conclusion, the concern of convenience and safety suggests why bicycles are becoming less common in today’s world, and policy and educational solutions should be put into practice early to promote this environmentally friendly means of transport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'proximity'.
Suggestion: proximity
...eople will be urged to opt for bikes in close proximity. Besides, citizens should be educated t...
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Line 6, column 735, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...usness and encourage citizens to cycle. In conclusion, the concern of convenienc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60797342193 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38176933528 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 537.3 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5938480892 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.846153846 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2140320548 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703423399106 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506567376913 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124148273478 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435806271878 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.55 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.65 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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