Many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyle in the countryside. Other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. Discuss both views and give your opinions.
Whether having a healthy lifestyle is more feasible in the urban or in the rural area remains a contentious topic. From my perspective, I agree that residing in the countryside would bring more health benefits. This essay will take both sides into consideration and give my verdict.
On the one hand, residing in the cities brings about a wide variety of options to lead a healthy lifestyle. To begin with, cities are often home to various health-related services, many of which could greatly aid city dwellers desiring a more healthy life. For example, patients with fatal illnesses, such as cardiovascular disease, can be treated by advanced medical technologies in big hospitals in municipalities. Moreover, there is a host of places to improve physical health such as fitness centers and health clubs. By playing sports and practicing in health centers, urban dwellers would be able to lead a healthy lifestyle.
On the other hand, I believe that living a country life can offer significant health-related benefits. Initially, inhabitants of rural regions have less tendency to suffer from mental problems such as stress and depression compared to city dwellers as they can get rid of the hustle and bustle of city life. Besides, the absence of pollutants and the presence of more trees can serve as a deterrent to adverse pollution-related diseases. Therefore, people may have better physical state to maintain a healthy lifestyle.
In conclusion, although people can gain advantages for their health in both cities and countryside, I concur that the rural area would provide better conditions to achieve a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...itions to achieve a healthy lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, may, moreover, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28244274809 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02030692942 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587786259542 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0722286702 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.461538462 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1538461538 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76923076923 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248446283742 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821072301073 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0494522072575 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140860474993 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143689315992 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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