Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.
What problems are associated with this?
What solutions can you suggest?
These days people are attracted towards the sedentary lifestyle, instead a healthier one; however, various facilities which include numerous workouts lead them to be healthier. This essay will discuss about the problems associated with unhealthy life and solutions which help them to lead a proper life.
On one hand, sedentary lifestyle leads to many health problems. Obesity is one major problem around the world, people do not follow proper diet, consume more amount food in irregular timings, which often leads to gaining in size and weight. Furthermore people with such food habits often struggle with many diseases. For Example, diabetes due to intake of high sugar calorie food. Also, people love to have beverages in higher quantities during parties. Consumption of alcohol leads to the damage of kidneys and liver. They also lack concentration in studies and not willing to work. Having such lifestyle leads to many health issues and disturbs work life.
On the other hand, creating awareness among the society is one solution. Firstly, people should be promoted to visit gyms often. This helps them to burn calories and gain muscle. This can be achieved by showing them the charts displays the fat, muscle mass indexes compared against their age, height. For instance, the chart can include, age group(25-30) weight ranges should be between (68-75 kilo) with height ranging between 5.5 inches to 5.10 inches. Secondly, Male and female who are not willing to join gyms, should be encouraged to do jogging or walking. These healthier habits help them to reduce fat content, lead a better lifestyle. Promoting awareness help them to lead
good lifestyle in the modern world.
To Conclude, providing the facts regarding unhealthy lifestyle would lead to diseases and sometimes resulting in death. Promoting people to visit gym and perform exercises on their own if unable to attend gyms helps them to lead better and healthy life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22756410256 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40498050159 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7975514691 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.55 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134216825516 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406139146106 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385292573018 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881279379182 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247147264213 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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