Despite large numbers of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining is gaining popularity in contemporary world .
What problems are associated with it ?
What solutions can you suggest ?
We are all aware of the numbers of gyms that are constantly increasing around us, but are we aware of our lifestyles? Is this a healthy life we’re living? Well, in this essay I will be tackling why we are maintaining ordinary life styles and how to develop a healthy lifestyle.
At first we need to know why isn’t anybody active anymore even though we have a lot of gyms surrounding us everywhere. Basically it’s how easy our lives became, how often do you see someone going to work on a bicycle for example? Never! It’s just that cars and other means of transportation are more easier and people just want the easy way out. Besides the fact that transportation is easier, everyone believes that they have no time to workout.
Although gyms are around us, people usually don’t have enough time to practice or even go for a walk, but what if we managed to hit the gym for an hour or two during our 24 hours of the day. I guarantee you that there is a nearby gym around everyone but people are just not concerned about their health anymore. If people were able to set up their day in an organized manner, everyone would be fit.
In a nutshell, humans are not worried about their health anymore despite the fact that there is always time for keeping up with our health. It’s all about time management, once you are able to manage your time, you could become a much healthier person than you are.
- Many criminals commit further crimes as soon as they are released from prison What do you think are the causes of this What effects will this have on society 56
- Some people think it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages 78
- The diagram details the process of making leather products 78
- The Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between Between 2000 and 2009 56
- Most school offers some type of physical education program to their students Why is it important Should physical education classes be required or optional 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[3]
Message: The adverb 'Never' is usually not used at the end of a sentence.
...going to work on a bicycle for example? Never! It’s just that cars and other means of...
^^^^^
Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...s and other means of transportation are more easier and people just want the easy way out. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, well, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50194552529 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39628068531 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579766536965 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.852211482 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4166666667 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.83333333333 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0933637211737 0.244688304435 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0318057121359 0.084324248473 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315803377177 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.055531792403 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0224612184389 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.82 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.