The development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world?
It is thought by many people that English which is the most widely spoken globally will predominate over other languages as tourism continues to improve. In other words, it can lead to English becoming the only language as others vanish eventually. While this change can have benefits in terms of easy communication, there are also some drawbacks.
Let’s begin by looking at the advantages. First, using English as a universal language can boost the understanding between not only nations but also individuals. There will be huge benefits for research and the educational field as all books and curriculums are written in English and the translation period can be cut off. Moreover, learning any foreign language requires 3 to 4 years of dedication which is considerably time-consuming. From an economic point of view, trade will be flourished more rapidly and consequently, it can contribute to a healthy world economy.
Turning to the other side, when every human group speaks only English, their native language will disappear along with their local cultures and traditions. Therefore, each place, especially ancient ones, will lose its own character and prestigious history. The diversity of cultures is one of the joys the world offer. There is no point to travel if all destinations have the same customs and language. What I mean by this is that the trend of tourism will also drop drastically. As a result, it will devastate countries that rely on tourism as a major source of income.
All things considered, using a common language strictly has both pros and cons. In a positive view, it is very beneficial for each global community to build trust and share knowledge effortlessly. However, the identity and rituals of each ethnic group are there to be lost. In my opinion, I tend to believe that the disadvantages outweigh the advantages as we, humans, must protect our own country’s rich cultures at all cost.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ountry’s rich cultures at all cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, i mean, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13249211356 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88624398187 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615141955836 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7779605258 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3888888889 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6111111111 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366277863176 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883418116218 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704991035343 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197728695187 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953240991094 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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