the the development of tourism contributed to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be globally spoken. What are the advantages and disadvantages of having one language in the world.
From the last two decades the tourism industry made its ways towards prosperity and zenith because many people across the world wants to explore some other countries across the globe and when they arrived in foreign country they prefer to communicate in English language because it is internationally spoken language. however, some people showed resentment that tourism exacerbates the use of English mode it would lead to become the only spoken language in East West and North South.
Firstly, English has become necessary to learn after the disintegration of former Russia and globalisation has compelled people to have expertise in it because it connects local with foreigner. Moreover if English remained the only language in the world then it would be easy for everyone to communicate easily as most of the international organisations and NGOs operating across the world and their official language is English so it would be easy for everyone to have easy access to them if one wants to work with them.
Secondly only spoken language can play role in tarnishing decades old language such as Mandarin, Chinese, Persian, Greek, Roman, and Arabic, and new generation would be inclined towards English and gradually they would forget their norms culture customs ethos, folkways. So it can be said that this would end the image of traditions of old civilization.
More preferable, one language could be very beneficial because it provides comfort in communicating and on the other side it is lethal for old norms because it would be vanished with the powerful weapon of one language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15891472868 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74834627497 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538759689922 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 81.0197758676 49.4020404114 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.142857143 106.682146367 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33613638391 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156312050319 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760476308168 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193254707677 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722827079985 0.056905535591 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.24 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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