Economic progress is one way to measure the success of one country, while some people think there are other factors should be considered? Within these factors, do you think anyone is more important than the others.
It can be said that, for some people, country success is measured with economic development, although others think that many aspects are important to. This essay will explain other factors and the relations between them.
To start with, besides economic, education is one of the significant factors that must be considered for measuring country development due to the fact that young generations rely on education for making them be prepared for developing their countries. This is evident that education has major role to advance a country inasmuch as, the young generations will gain lots of knowledge for their needs, because of learning process from elementary schools to higher education such as universities. As proofs, develop countries such as Finland, Japan and Singapore are countries which have better education systems.
In Addition, another factor that is believed important is health since, without health, there is no human resources. If a country had healthy human resources, it would be convenient for the country itself since it has demography bonus. For instance, South Korea, Austria and Australia are develop countries which own good health systems.
Moreover, it can be seen that the three parameters (economic, education and health) have strong linkages. This might be proven since all of develop countries which posses better economic systems are supported with better education and health systems to. If countries wish to improve their education systems and health systems, they require money or vice versa.
In conclusion, it seems that education and health are important to be considered besides economic. I tend to admit that three of them affect each other and it cannot stand by themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, if, moreover, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3962962963 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65662977395 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1289599986 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.076923077 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7692307692 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199116410387 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0776392395063 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065116534265 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129284618335 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0858468715155 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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