In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
In different moments of our lives we observe some people push themselves more than others, especially in our academic and professional lives. There are several forms that this kind of approach or lifestyle can be positive to achieve your targets and we describe some aspects about this below.
The special group of people see the world and your challenges with unusual eyes. They really believe that is possible and necessary to do more than others to achieve different results. These people are moved by a personal instinct to change your reality. In some cases this feeling emerges by a personal necessity, family troubles, spiritual inspiration or by money. But, independent of your reasons these kinds of people are able to spend more time and energy developing themselves and your project till they achieve /their results, and generally they really make a difference.
I really agree with the thought line that says that it is necessary to put an extra effort to achieve extraordinary results. This kind of approach encourages the people to push themselves up all the time and as a result we create an environment to improve our society about all aspects. I believe too that each person with the correct motivation and some resources is able to change your reality.
Finally, I think that the changes and real transformations are always linked with some hard work, and we are one group of people with different motivations and reasons, but they are able to put more energy than others to make this world a better place to live. I think to encourage and develop in our childrens this kind of mentality is necessary to create a great future for us.
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but, finally, if, really, so, i think, kind of, as a result, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91814946619 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61403828105 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.508896797153 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9543068475 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173863704897 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0646643680244 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564893825734 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111746222622 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434509349758 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.