Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not be
forgotten. Discuss.
The last decades have been witnessing a breakthrough in communications and transportations devices which leads to appearance of revolutionary concept “globalization”. As everything else, globalization has its own pros and cones especially towards the economics and financing.
At the beginning, let’s state that, before those advances in economic definitions, local markets in developing countries were manipulated by few punches of monopolists. Nowadays, the economic acts and legislations - that have been raised after development of globalization – enhance the accessibility to those markets. Furthermore competitions between local and international manufacturers suppress the monopoly acts, enrich the quality of products and decline the prices. In addition, a surge of cash flow as result of direct investments of multinational companies in low-income countries has aided those countries’ economies and created new jobs opportunities. Additionally, had not been for the globalization, the wealthy countries couldn’t have found new markets for their own products.
Nonetheless, the mentioned great impacts on economics, globalization has its own drawbacks. Globalization nearly eliminates the nations’ borders, making the world as one unit. Thus, any economic significant slump in single country puts its own mark on the markets of other countries. For instance, the global crises in the 2000s, after it had happened in the housing sector in USA, it crossed the oceans to the 4 corners of the world. The chain reactions of such catastrophes expanded to other investments and caused dumping in the developed countries markets, but their effects were dramatic on poor countries. In the same context, the low-income countries finds themselves has exchanged the local monopolists by foreigner ones. Some multi-national companies misuses that economic freedom creating more dumping in the poor countries incomes.
Eventually, the globalization is an outstanding footprint on the course of developing the human history. Importantly, it’s vital to create laws and acts to protect the international as well the local businesses from the major economic catastrophes. Also, many steps should be taken to protect developing countries from the misuse of multi-national mega corporates.
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- Even though globalization affects the world’s economics in a very positive way, its negative side should not beforgotten. Discuss. 89
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, thus, well, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1997.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 6.01506024096 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.62255029204 2.80592935109 129% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605421686747 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7545735474 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.470588235 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5294117647 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82352941176 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159103215681 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055057747468 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0391649642411 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103594191929 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260937204135 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.64 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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