Society is based on rules and laws. It could not function if individuals were free to do whatever they wanted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the thriving and prospect of society, humans today possess more and more rights and benefits. It is apparent that society is formed based on the adjustment of rules and laws. Yet there are some valid arguments opposing that society could not function if people were free to do as they please. From my personal standpoint, I partly agree with this idea, and this essay will shed light on this issue.
On the one hand, the government introduces laws to the public with the purpose of guaranteeing the safety and security of society, whilst residents obey the regulations regarded as taken for granted. Without being imposed laws, society will get disorder in every aspect, leading to crises related to unbalance economy or severe inflation. The fact is there are more and more criminals, and even worse this rate is witnessing an upward trend with alarming speed. To give an example, if there were no rules or no police enforce laws to adjust human behaviors, thus there would be a certain number of people who would take advantage of this situation to do harm to innocent people in case of robbing their valuable assets. Therefore, many people believe that laws and regulations should exist in order to set boundaries so that people will behave in a moral way in harmony with society's standards.
Having said that, I do believe that in some cases, the amount of rules and laws that the community is subjected to follow in almost modern societies brings more harm than good. Most rules and laws these days may just benefit a minority of people, while the majority are still being affected by the very rules and laws that protect them. For example, in many countries, owning a gun is deemed an illegal behavior. However, in the event of a thief breaking into a house and posing a serious threat by using a dangerous weapon. For that reason, they do not defend themselves effectively. Furthermore, many regulations and laws these days favor the rich and oppose the poor. That is why in some nations, the gap between the rich and the poor is getting bigger and bigger.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that there only needs to be one universal law: do no harm to others. The innate goodwill and intelligence of human beings will definitely create a bright society as well as a peaceful place for the whole community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 845, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a moral way" with adverb for "moral"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...t boundaries so that people will behave in a moral way in harmony with societys standards. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1926.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 402.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79104477612 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.47771567384 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47528812679 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564676616915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 613.8 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.7328317348 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94444444444 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224436373353 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683708516026 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783968337462 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137369364373 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525219005641 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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