The expansion of multinational companies and increase in globalization produce positive effects to everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
It is argued that whether the popularity of transactional firms and rise of international cooperation has brought tremendous advantages to many people worldwide. I completely agree with this statement since positive impacts of the phenomenon could be seen in numerous aspects.
Domestical companies and individuals are the main benificiaries from the developement of globalization. When a multinational organization invests in a different country, it tends to recruit the local for working. This opens many job opportunities for local people. In addition, given the high requirements of job applicants, international firms therefore pay a higher salary, and more bennefits for workers. As a result, people are able to receive decent income and live better off. Another merit is that along with money, foreign companies would bring in their technologies, and management procedures which are fundamental in the growth of domestically established companies. This is because, international organiztions will share these valuable resources in order to receive the support from their local partners in the process of coordination. Thus, it is not only benefical for individuals but the local businesses, while international cooperation is expanded.
In addition, the expansion of transactional firms and increase in global cooperation also act as precedessor for the flourishment of nations. First, the increase in foreign investment means there will be finance for development of infrastructure and facilities of countries. These crucial constructions facilitate the exchange of goods and make transport become easier within nations. Secondly, quality of the workforce will be enhanced, thanks to professional workplaces and advanced technology from foreign investors. More importantly, to welcome investment from other nations, local governments have to open their economy through open policies and legislations which stimulate competition among the country. This is fundamental for the optimization of the use capital in these nations. Under fierece competitive environment, firms has to lower products and services prices, improve their products' redeeming features and finally creates more values for customers. These measures in turn encourage well-being of citizens and growth of economies.
In sum, local people, companies and country as a whole will be beneficial from the openess of their economy for transactional companies and international collaboration. In my opinion, this trend should earn more support from individuals globally.
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| 2023-03-13 | tieuquynh | 89 | view |
| 2022-09-28 | Charles Le | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, in addition, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2174.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.90760869565 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34178591195 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570652173913 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6922597062 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.7 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108935921226 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0342177595118 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456720071881 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766956295789 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298590216661 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 27.83 50.2224549098 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.9 11.3001002004 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.0 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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