Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?
Human are responsible for a variety of environmental problems, but we can take steps to reduce the damage that we are causing to our planet. This essay will discuss issues about environment and solutions that governments and each individual can take to resolve these worldwide problems.
Nowadays, two of the biggest threats to the environment are air pollution and waste. Gas emissions from factories and exhaust fumes from vehicles lead to global warming, which has a huge number of significant impacts on the Earth such as climate change, the rising of sea level and the melting of the polar ice caps. As the human population increased rapidly every year, we are also producing ever greater quantities of waste, which contaminates the earth and pollutes rivers and oceans.
Governments could certainly make more effort to reduce the air pollution through passing a new law to limit emissions from industrial areas or forcing companies to use renewable energy from solar, wind and water power. They also could impose “green taxes” on drivers and airlines companies. What they do will encourage citizens to use public transport and to use fewer flights aboard, thus reducing toxic emissions to environment.
Individuals should also take responsibility for affections which they have on our planet. Each household could have several rubbish bins to separate waste and we need to choose products with less packaging and recycle as much as possible. Most supermarkets now provide reusable bags for customers as well as collection banks for glass, paper and plastic bottles in their car park. By reusing and recycling, we can help to decrease amount of waste.
To sum up, both national governments and individuals must play their part in taking care of the environment for a greater future.
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- Some people believe that hobbies need to be difficult to be enjoyable. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1525.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25862068966 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77050028321 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637931034483 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.081661305 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.307692308 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167783370725 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527632213675 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516904155667 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826584703441 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543325142266 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.