It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction.
To what extent do your agree or disagree with this opinion?
What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?
Children and Plants have one quality in common. They grow up as they have been nurtured .Plants need to be given good care .fertilizers for it to grow and at times their branches may also have to be cut to stop them from falling on the ground.
Similarly, to children fertilizer is teaching them right and wrong and branches could be the way of teaching them. All children are different from each other and there is no one rule book to teach them all the same way .Some kids learn in the first time, some after 10 times. Some hear patiently, some have to be made to sit and teach them out.
However, as asked in the passage that 'Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction' is highly debatable. Punishment may not be 'necessary' however can be an option. In my opinion, It depends on the situation, the act and the circumstance.
If their act of a certain behaviour may not be highly impacting they can be taught in calm and polite manner. However. if their behaviour is extremely wrong, harmful or humiliating strict action needs to be taken. Then, punishment could be a way to teach them. It is certain humans remember things when they see or experience then listen.
A punishment could definitely help the kid remember his mistake, keep in mind his behaviour and be careful going forward. Whereas, just teaching them verbally may not have huge impact as they may have it in mind now but may forget latter.
Parents & teachers are two strongest pillars in the cognitive growth of children. They both have different importance, responsibility and value in a child's life.
However, parents can use stricter and harder punishment as compared to teachers as the child firstly belongs to their parents; and parents overall can pay more attention to their own child which may be difficult for a teacher to pay attention to only one child.
In order to conclude, partially support the idea of punishing children. Punishment should be a way and not necessity in every situation to teach a child right and wrong.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, similarly, so, then, whereas, all the same, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1690.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81481481481 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82476663813 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521367521368 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9327287002 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9473684211 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.36842105263 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185984120022 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0690594470816 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670624477811 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988994573946 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0738333229315 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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