Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is argued that the destruction of flora and fauna may put our civilisation on the verge of extinction. In my opinion, this is definetely true and people should take immediate actions to tackle the issue.
The demise of the tree forests subsequently results in the loss of the biodiversity which is fundamental in maintaining all forms of life. Once the natural habitat of living creatures being destroyed, the air quality is soon polluted with CO2 that toxicates the respiratory of animals and jeorpadises them gradually. Likewise, the ozone layer damaged, the main culprit of greenhouse effects that have direct impact on human health. Finally, the affect of erosion would put many low land areas at risk due to the lack of protection of greens. To illustate, salt water has increasingly eroded both sides of Mekong river in the recent years that is posing great threat to the local paddy fields.
There are honorable options could be regarded in order to alliviate the affect of the phenomenon. First, the authorities should provide relevant education programmes to raise public awareness of the problems. This would rally support from citizens to face the challenge in the years to come. An additional solution could be taken into account is that political leaders could encourage the inteference of private sector and individuals through subsidies or taxation. One case in point is that European governments are lowering taxes and rewarding income for manufacturers to promote the usage of electric cars.
In sum, as the plantation is destroyed, mankind and animals are most effected because of pollution and erosion. This could be thwarted with the involvement of ordinary people and other institutional bodies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, likewise, may, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2274368231 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83230425153 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657039711191 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5171806432 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.428571429 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.034062803506 0.244688304435 14% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0106091178535 0.084324248473 13% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0152564517024 0.0667982634062 23% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0167595678847 0.151304729494 11% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107447162941 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.05 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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