Free-style: Someone I admire
When we are young, we are like a white paper. What they draw, we learn from it. But it is not until we grow up that we realize that how admirable these drawings are .The drawings are none other than my mother. She possesses all the qualities that make me love her. I admire my mother very much, she is a great mother.
Humility is another valuable quality that distinguishes someone who is admirable and she has it. . She always tries to solve the problem in the best way, no matter how much time it takes. She doesn't brag about anything but she gives the best to me. She comforts me by patiently listening to what I had to say because she is the one who understand me best. She has stamina in difficult situations, dealing with delays or she never shows anger in front of her children and others. It is this quality that makes me feel that my mother is a woman who sacrifices and loves her family with all her heart.
She is a very tolerant and respectful person. She understands and accepts the mistakes of others. She is willing to understand, forgive me when I make mistakes. She loves, shares with those around her instead of enmity, hates and helps people in difficult situations. For example, every day she buys vegetables and fruits to share with poor families during the epidemic season, although not much, but I can see that my mother's heart is very big. She brushed away the anger, the hatred. Instead, she cheers others up when they have a sense of correction. Besides, she is extremely respectful of others. She values honor, qualities of others. She cares about other people's feelings before acting and speaking. My mother supports and respects my decisions so that I can learn from my failures.
Her open mind, kindness, and sense of understanding have always impressed me. She is a quiet and kind woman who always tries to put a smile on my face. That is why I admire and love her.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
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Suggestion: .
...omeone who is admirable and she has it. . She always tries to solve the problem i...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
..., no matter how much time it takes. She doesnt brag about anything but she gives the b...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... anything but she gives the best to me. She comforts me by patiently listening to w...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... she is the one who understand me best. She has stamina in difficult situations, de...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nds and accepts the mistakes of others. She is willing to understand, forgive me wh...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...stand, forgive me when I make mistakes. She loves, shares with those around her ins...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ity, hates and helps people in difficult situations. For example, every day she b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 73.0 24.0651302605 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54069767442 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42106210018 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540697674419 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 23.0 5.43587174349 423% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.1536968184 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.48 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.76 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.32 7.06120827912 19% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 20.0 8.67935871743 230% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0453836954334 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019443506317 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0491556080681 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0387459879396 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229457400055 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 13.0946893788 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 12.4159519038 68% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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