IN THE FUTURE ALL CARS, BUSES AND TRUCKS WILL BE DRIVELESS. THE ONLY PEOPLE TRAVELLING INSIDE THESE VEHICLES WILL BE PASSENGERS.
DO YOU THINK THE ADVANTAGES OF DRIVELESS VEHICLE OUTWEIGH THE DISADVANTAGE?
In the near future, almost transports such as cars, buses or trucks will be replaced with driverless vehicles, and the people traveling inside these vehicles will be passengers. This article will debate whether there are more advantages to this occurrence than downsides.
There are two main reasons why driverless vehicles like cars, buses, and trucks will be helpful and contribute a crucial part to transportation in the future. First and foremost, when all the vehicles are driverless and automatic, it will be much more convenient and enjoyable for people to go on a trip as they will have more time to enjoy the view while they are traveling. Basically, the car is automatic and driverless so the people in the family who drove the car before won’t have to focus on driving anymore, and from that more conversations will be made between people in the family so that the people in the family will be bonded through some journey and trip like this. Secondly, driverless vehicles help to prevent accidents due to the fact that some people are often drunk while driving their vehicles, and a lot of pitiful deaths are caused by car accidents. When vehicles are automatic, the systems will take control of the routes, speed, and movement of that vehicle so accidents won’t likely be happened and many lives will be preserved.
On the other hand, there are also some drawbacks to using automatic or driverless vehicles in the future. The more developed automatic vehicles are, the more unemployed some people will be because some people got their jobs as taxi drivers, bus drivers, or truck drivers and these jobs are their main income. If there are replaced by automatic vehicles, they will be unemployed and will be struggling in finding a new job to bring home the bacon for their families or maybe themselves. Moreover, automatic vehicles will have difficulties in handling some traffic situations. For example, when an automatic car is moving on a road and a truck lost control of its brakes and swerves in the middle of the road. In this situation, the automatic car will definitely hit the truck but the car which is driven by a driver will over-pull in time on some side of the road because most drivers are trained for some situations like this when they have their driving license.
In conclusion, automatic vehicles have a ton of benefits and they will play a vital part in the field of transportation. However, people and the government still have to guarantee that automatic vehicles won’t affect the number of unemployed people and traffic must still be maintained in its original state.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2171.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 442.0 315.596192385 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91176470588 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58517132086 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63203475065 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.438914027149 0.561755894193 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.0260477908 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.733333333 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4666666667 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.358712673598 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147651790126 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0821443564771 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.255032951422 0.151304729494 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748006020155 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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