In the future no one buy a printed newspaper or books because they able to read everything that they want online without payment To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement

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In the future no one buy a printed newspaper or books because they able to read everything that they want online without payment. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement .

In consideration of various aspects of the benefits of reading e-books, there has been mounting concern on the whether in the near future would the printed newspaper or books be totally superseded bye-books. From my perspective, I have a bright side for this upcoming phenomenon as the pros it possess may outweigh that of traditional books.
At the very first glance, it is indisputably that this alteration will help solve one of the most global issues: material wastes. In deed, books constitutes a great amount of wood fibres. e consumption of books, eventually will culminate in the excessive exploitation of woods. Thus, thrown-away books are adversely trigger the better preservation for such materials. Yet, E-books only takes up an electrical device offering accessibility to all kinds of individual preference. Furthermore, comparing to the flexibility and handiness of obsolete method of readings where the mass can weigh down the bag soring your shoulders, e-books can be accessed with no regard of locations and time. Lastly, e-books ought to set the case for the a eligible reading insurance. Admittedly, a great deal of resources are committing detrimental impact upon readers by, namely, false information, wrong conception dissemination,... which devastates consumers' mental health and provoke a wreak havoc on the right path of acknowledging. Within e-books may open the ground for judges and confirmation from the community, guarantee a healthy enviroment for people set reading as their cup of teas.
However, contradicting to what has been told, old-fashioned books are remaining its value. Indeed, it is avoidable that glueing to the electrical devices may dissolve the truth image of utilising the down-to-earth materials. setting up a astonishing ground is intrinsically crucial to effective reading. Hence, a book is the initial priority.
In conclusion, the trend of replacing paper-books to e-books is comprehensively a beneficial movements as the advantages it exerts on the revolution of humanity is not idle. On the flip hand, old method of readings can still bring up a a transient value

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, lastly, may, so, still, thus, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41087613293 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23357695658 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655589123867 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.304242495 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3888888889 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38888888889 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126863135931 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0347698415402 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031988865902 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0710162872777 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0170522949755 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.87 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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