In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with that statement?
In the future, people will not purchase newspapers or books because it is more convenient for them to access information on the internet without paying money. I totally agree that people will no longer read traditional newspapers because online news helps people to acknowledge large amounts of useful information and save time buying traditional newspapers.
People are increasingly shifting towards online newspapers. This could be because they can access a large amount of information. News sites contain a diversity of information from every aspect of life, and if they want to search for any problem on the news sites, there will be numerous scientific articles for them to read. The more information they read, the more intelligent they are. For example, my friend passed the exam successfully because when she did the research, she read many news articles about Health, Beauty and Science in The NewYork Times newspaper. This not only helps her get a higher score, but she also has access to a lot of useful knowledge.
An explanation for reading online newspapers is that people can save time and complete other work. Online articles are available on news sites, readers just need to open their device and access to those sites to read news. Many office workers who are busy at the company may find it easy for them to read as they will spend their spare time updating the information. For example, my uncle is a manager at a company and he is very busy, so he chooses to update the world’s happenings through news sites such as Tuoi Tre Online and VnExpress in his leisure time in order to save time going to the shops to buy printed newspapers.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that people should consider reading the news on the online website instead of buying a traditional type of news. Online newspapers help readers to get a large amount of information from a diversity of aspects and save time to do other work.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 419, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., my uncle is a manager at a company and he is very busy, so he chooses to update...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1606.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86666666667 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61800644755 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506060606061 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8584439909 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.714285714 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239064097059 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0924699947229 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532985313383 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160206369986 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428467137355 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.