The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems?
In this day and age, we are living in a world where the problems relative with class division in society are heated topics and discussed. Especially, it is widely acknowledged that the distance-gap between the affluent and the underprivileged is increasing significantly. This essay is going to demonstrate that the main repercussion of this status is social security disorder and it can be tackled by several measures.
The foremost issue associated with expanding the gap between wealthy individuals and poorer ones is the theft and smuggling, especially with the least undeveloped countries. At these areas, low-income people account for a high proportion, and thus they will tend to commit crimes such as robbery and illegal trade. This situation cause substantial financial damage and maybe jeopardize to human’s life. African perfectly exemplifies this situation, where robbery cause damaging economic and impact to the profile of these countries. This is a testament to the effects of different social classes.
In order to holistically address the aforementioned problem, the government must take specific measures. In the foreseeable future, levying a steeper tax on the affluent and supporting for the poor are efficient methods. For instance, conducting more charitable activities, and providing food and other necessaries frequently. In the long term, allocating more budget for education in tandem with lifting awareness of people about educating for children are the optimal methods for the development of country.
In conclusion, rising the space between the rich and the poor are likely to trigger extreme consequences, and the proposed solutions must be taken to combat the effects of these status.
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- The gap between the rich and the poor is increasingly wide, as rich people become richer and poor people grow poorer. What problems could this situation cause? What are the solutions to address those problems? 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 330, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'causes'.
Suggestion: causes
...bbery and illegal trade. This situation cause substantial financial damage and maybe ...
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Line 4, column 173, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this status' or 'these statuses'?
Suggestion: this status; these statuses
... must be taken to combat the effects of these status.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1463.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56273764259 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08157488079 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619771863118 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.493803577 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.538461538 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216992646384 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628623847005 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.035965728875 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11357330653 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022515028563 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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