Genetic engineering is an important issue in modern society. Some people think that it will improve people’s lives in many ways. Others feel that it may be a threat to life on earth. Discuss both opinions and give your opinion?
Opinion is divided as to whether genetic engineering could effect detrimental effects on health of humans and other forms of life or not. Although such scientific advances could help areas with extreme climates to fulfil their nutritional requirements, these practices raise concerns over the safety of native plants and public health.
The former view is predicated on the premise that by manipulating gene codes of plants, they can thrive in harsh conditions. Such idea has been proved to be successful in countries, such as Israel where a majority of the land is desert and inhospitable to most vegetation. By inserting, therefore, codes of plants with great resistance to the scarcity of water and vital minerals into the local vegetables, the crop yield has increased significantly to not only meet the local demand but also export the surplus.
The advocates of the latter view, however, indicate that scientifically modified seeds can pose serious threats to native flora as well as humans’ health in the long-term. This is because pollen from such seeds can accidentally travel by wind or birds to neighboring fields and pollinate with non-GM plants, which can result in uncontrolled varieties that are potentially harmful to local plants. More significantly, such unexpected mutation can affect the well-being of consumers unnoticed. Some studies have demonstrated that consuming genetically produced foods, like tofu, on a regular basis has induced some children to reach puberty faster, and caused some disturbing changes in behavior.
In conclusion, despite the benefits predominately related to production of crops, this kind of foods is harmful to both plants and humans in alarming manners.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2023-10-21 | linhmysuni85@gmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2023-10-21 | linhmysuni85@gmail.com | 89 | view |
| 2023-10-21 | linhmysuni85@gmail.com | 84 | view |
| 2023-08-31 | thecong2007 | 80 | view |
| 2023-03-10 | hyst12 | 78 | view |
- More and more people are choosing to eat healthy food and exercise regularly Why What can we do to encourage this 79
- The culture of different countries is becoming increasingly similar so there is no point for people to go traveling abroad as they could have the same experience at home Do you agree or disagree 93
- In many countries people now wear western clothes such as suits and jeans rather than traditional clothing Why is this the case Is this a positive or negative development 89
- some people believe that damage to the environment is an inevitable consequence of the improvement of living standards Do you agree or disagree 11
- Only government action can solve housing shortages in big cities to what extent do you agree or disagree 67
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinion is divided as to whether genetic engineering could effect detrim...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...as to whether genetic engineering could effect detrimental effects on health of humans...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46240601504 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93816895212 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665413533835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6926767319 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.3 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080592010322 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031260402842 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442070431766 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436121962467 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292129304293 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinion is divided as to whether genetic engineering could effect detrim...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 60, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...as to whether genetic engineering could effect detrimental effects on health of humans...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46240601504 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93816895212 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665413533835 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.6926767319 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.3 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.080592010322 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.031260402842 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442070431766 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0436121962467 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292129304293 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.68 8.58950901804 124% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.